Need help with this mix

Oligopod

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Nov 29, 2007
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Hi all,

Here's something I've been working on for the past couple of weeks.

http://www.oligopod.me.uk/music/03-07-01.mp3

I'm struggling a bit with getting something clear, yet powerful if that makes sense. Questions:

1. How's the guitar tone? Are the guitars too loud in the mix? Is there any way to make them cut more through the mix?
2. How's the low end? I've found this really difficult to judge, as I'm monitoring on crappy speakers.

Any help is appreciated.