need some help with mix

iroc

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Mar 5, 2003
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http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7179478

Heres an mp3 of a song I wrote but I've been having trouble with the mix. It sounds very congested and not open, I've been comparing to other songs I like mainly gojira (mars to sirius) type mix which sounds so open and huge and I just can't seem to get there. Any suggestions and advice would be very helpful. thanks