New Demo Mix FTFDesque / First Post.

[Pash]

Hi lads!

This is my first post here. I've been recording since I was about 10. Demo's and ideas for the bands I've been in.

Never had any training or anything, just picked it up myself. Thought it was about time I asked a few questions etc Due to record my band's debut full length over the next 4 months so I really want to get this sounding as best I can.

The track below is a rough Pre production, half finished, basically like to get some feedback on what Im doing wrong.

http://www.projects.gbr.fm/Pre Pro 1_2.mp3

Im using Cubase 5, Ozone 4, Superior drummer 2.0 + Drumagog with a few samples I've got from UMF. Pod farm for the guitars, quad tracked with a tiny bit of widening on the buss & subtle EQ.

Thanks in advance guys! Fire away! Look forward to contributing to the forum with some samples/impluses etc!

 

[Pash]

Also forgot to mention there's no bass guitar tracked on this yet. Derp!

 

[Ataraxia2320]

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[sk8a123]

the snare is kinda lost... maybe raise it a little bit, also theres a lot of low end..

 

[Pash]

Thanks guys! Im mixing on some really dodgy headphones at the moment, so I think I may be over compensating the low end Really appreciate the help!

 

[Pash]

Had another go, made some changes. Cut the low end and boosted the guitars around 450 and 8000 trying to clear them up a bit. Boosted the snare and cut some of the verb

http://www.projects.gbr.fm/Pre%20Pro%201_2_2.mp3

Do you guys reckon Im anywhere near getting it sounding alright? Thanks for you help!