New Demo :) Vocals?

[Kyuss789]

Hey guys I would like some feedback on this song I wrote. I know the mix is not very good but I would likes some comments on the song itself (ie flow, energy, feeling etc). also I would really really like some screamo vocals to mix so if there is any vocalists that would care to have they're vox on this I would love to have them because I've now wrote a song that has had vocals on it ;P just let me know your doing it plz

Thanx a load for even looking at this

 

[Kyuss789]

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[Kyuss789]

Anyone???

 

[infest]

Sounds pretty good to me, but I personally would do a few small changes.
The kick is a bit too 'clicky' for my taste ( don't know if it's the right term? but I think you'll understand what I mean ) and snare definitely lacks some body. Guitar tone is awesome by the way, fits the music well IMO.

 

[keepingpacestudios]

i would volunteer my vocals

 

[Kyuss789]

Thanx infest I agree with you I am going to change the snare and kick not that I did anything its a preset lol

and go for it buddy would love to hear what you have got

 

[keepingpacestudios]

can i have the wav ?

 

[MAXMEDLOW]

@keepingpacestudios

The Soundcloud player has a download button

 

[keepingpacestudios]

i want the wav because mixing vocals into an mp3 sounds like a bad idea

 

[Kyuss789]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8511207/Demo%20wave.wav
there you go, give it about 1 and a half to upload sorry slow internet.
also when you have done all of your vox could you export all your dry stems of so I could have a go at mixing? that would be sick thanx

 

[keepingpacestudios]

yeah man
will do
so just leave the vox tracks dry?

 

[Kyuss789]

yeah just so I can have them to have a go at mixing thanx dude

 

[Kyuss789]

if there is any other vocalists that want to have a go plz do I want lots of different sources to practice mixing

 

[Kyuss789]

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