New! I need critique (WIP) - alternative metal

[dissident]

Hi i'm dissident from italy, my band is called This Broken Machine, and we're finishing our first demo, tracked, mixed and mastered by myself

Here you can listen 2 songs:
www.myspace.com/thisbrokenmachineband

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My Grudge
Feardom

Just curious on what you think, any critique welcome!

 

[AudioPhile777]

"My Grudge": Vocals could be a little more present in the mix...

"Sidereal": Would sound very cool as an intro to something really aggressive!

"Feardom": hmm...

All three sound terribly mono to me... no spacial depth whatsoever... I'd say work on that... I could probably chime on about this and that, but I'm a noob to this whole thing... so... yeah..

keep doing it...

 

[KeithRT99]

the clean guitars are too loud in my grudge, and the vocals are really quiet. the rest of it sounds decent to me.

 

[dissident]

How can i enhance the stereo image?