New Instrumental "Corneal Refraction" - free mp3 download

[Kripa]

hello everyone... here's a new short instrumental track named Corneal Refraction from my solo project Nirob .... plz check it out and leave your valuable comments & criticisms... and also feel free to download the mp3 if u like it... thanks

 

[The Uncreator]

The riffs are tight, mix is good, but this honestly feels like it needs vocals and some lead work to me. The structure just seems more lenient that way. The tone is good, although to me its a bit active in the high end, just ever so slightly - personal preference. Effects are a nice touch and there blended in well.

I guess really my only gripe is the guitar tone in the high end, the other stuff can really be tossed up to personal preference, but that's just my 2 cents.