New Mix - TDWP/OM&M Style

Sounds cool dude!

Backing up most which has been said. Kick to come down a bit, send the snare to reverb bus and add a smidge, and personally, the vocals are too up front for me! Maybe add a little reverb to them too, make them sit a little nicer or compress them some more (if possible!)
 
on the singing parts, it would be cool if the lead guitar came up a bit more and not so hard panned, only for the singing part tho. It kinda threw me off lol. I like it though
 
Snare is a bit boxy man, try thinning the bottom mids out a boost around 4k for the crack!

Then try copying the snare sample to the track and boosting lows in this channel, sending tht to reverb 100% wet. so that you have a low reverb to belnd in with the snare, then automate this down in the faster snare bits and bring it up in breakdowns.
 
tune the vocals... add a little (more) delay to them as well. Everyone else covered my thoughts on the rest of the mix.
 
updated mix is pumping intensely, go back to the last 2bus settings you had for sure. kick needs a big cut in the flubby range, low mids. should bring the whole thing down and then add a bit of a highself to get the smack cutting through but leaving the mud out. snare improvement is good