New original song

[Craigocaster]

Here's a new original song I wrote. No vocals or
bass recorded just yet. But you get the idea. Any mixing advice or feedback would be awesome!

https://soundcloud.com/craig-schmidt-1/transmission-1

 

[Craigocaster]

Here's an updated mix with some vocals tracked.

Any feedback would be awesome!

http://soundcloud.com/craig-schmidt-1/transmission/s-rD6qH

 

[Craigocaster]

Bump

 

[Craigocaster]

Ok finished this track.

I'm pretty stoked about it. If anybody is a fan of melodic hardcore and has 2 minutes and 54 seconds to spare, check out this track! And let me know what you think. C'maaaaaaan


http://soundcloud.com/craig-schmidt-1/transmission-1/s-FD8t9

 

[1111belphegor]

I like the song! Some really loud screams there, man!
If I were to improve anything I would add some more power to the low end - I miss a strong bass track. Also, you could perhaps work on creating some more variations for the drum patterns. Perhaps some Double-kicks…?

Please feel free to critique my latest mix here:

http://www.ultimatemetal.com/forum/practice-room/913155-need-feedback-mix-master.html

Rock on!