New song for your listening

[fuimjb]

Hey guys here's one of my band's new songs. I know it's not as metal as the other stuff here but I really wanted to share this with you guys. I'm really proud of this one. Full song with vocals and all.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5191375/ShootTheMessenger.mp3

 

[Mago]

the bass is overpowered, but i really like the drumsound dude!
can't say the same about the guitars though^^
song's really nice!

 

[fuimjb]

What's wrong with the guitars to you? I like my tone here. Thanks for listening dude

 

[Mago]

they are muddy, lack of highs/brilliance
the basic tone is good though
but they would need some clearness

 

[Cacoph0ny]

yeah i agree the guitars are a bit too muddy. and id bring down the vocals a little bit

 

[fuimjb]

Anybody else?

 

[professorlamp]

meh i like it
Can't hear any problems really
i think the vocals maybe should come up a tad (mainly in the chorus or when more stuff gets added,i starts to get cluttered and masked)