New song, plus my first attempt at doing vocals check it out!

[tobin1]

Hey guys, I just recently started to try and work on my screaming vocals and finally decided to try and put something together. Vocals/Guitar/Bass/Drums are all written/mixed by me...let me know if im doing something wrong with my vocals, or the mix sucks, or whatever it is! I just need feedback

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2580845/In My Hands.mp3

Thanks for listening!

 

[tobin1]

mmmmm...bump....anyone?

 

[drope934]

Cymbals are too loud and guitars are buried in the mix, the whole mix need more "clarity", the vocals are good dude!

 

[3tuxedo]

dude i love it. really good job, its got a nice full sound.

 

[icos]

Vocals are good, but drums sound like they were programmed by a guitarist.

Drum sounds are all good, but the patterns just sound a bit "wrong" to me.

you would pronbably say the same thing about my riffs, me being a drummer and all.....:Spin:

 

[mili9152]

I think the vocals sound somewhat buried in the mix, maybe clear more room in the 2 - 4khz so they can be more upfront. Also, cymbals are a bit overbearing. Good work though!