new song

[ßehemoth]

hi guys

i made a song, but i dont think the drums are good
and still no bass
maybe u could help me a bit

and pls tell me your opinions of the song

i have no band and made the song all by myself so its a bit hard to make every instrument good^^

http://www.spidersneak.com/erebor/index.html

 

[Conti]

to be honest I dont like the song that much but I can give you a couple tips

TUNE YOUR GUITAR!!!

thats always good

and in the start of the song if you put from vibrato on those high notes it would sound very beautiful.