new story *collapses*

[dreaming neon darkspot]

http://storywrite.com/story/show/47189

warning:
there are some pretty grisly, violent parts in this story. also, i just finished it and dont have the stomach to go back through it in its entirety to patch up some of the things i had to go back and alter while writing it. i thought i got it all for he most part during the writing process, but if there's anything that needs fixing, just tell me.

thanks for reading!
~Laura

 

[El Stormo]

I'm printing it now and shall read it at work.

 

[Souls of Black]

That was pretty damn good Laura. Good plot twist. You should do some more stories.

 

[Tongue_Ring]

Laura = greatest author ever

 

[Lunar Still]

That was a great story Laura! I left you a nice comment....hopefully my next one turns out well. I'm almost done...

 

[Souls of Black]

One of these day's, I will get off my lazy ass and write some things as well.
Till then, Go Girl!