New To recording / mixing

[21-only-son]

Hey guys, can you guys listen to this clip and tell me how I can improve my demos?

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6031221/orange-pod-test.mp3

My current set up is Schecter > EMG 81/85 > POD 2.0 > Apogee Duet > Logic

I also use impulses like Catharsis and recabinet.

For this clip I recorded 2 guitars, used some drum loops. I didn't use a bass. Sorry for the crappy playing but hopefully you get an idea where I'm.

 

[Tommy Evans]

High Pass your guitars around 80-120hz and then turn em down. (theyre too "subby" in some parts and too loud in general) Throw in some bass and we can probably help more.