New to recording need some tips... audio sample

[melovine]

ok so ive been recording on and off for a couple of years just for writing purposes mainly and i really want to expand my knowledge of recording and start getting what i hear in my head on "tape". i have been learning alot from the net and books especially this site and i figure its time to see what i can learn from talking directly to some of the pros on here.

here is a link to just a guitar/drum jam, really short, but it will give you an idea of where i'm at. Any one notice any obvious mistakes? looking forward to your responses.

my gear is a presonus fp10 into a macbook pro, running logic. just picked up superior drummer 2.0(not in this clip though)

rough mix

 

[arv_foh]

my advice would be to check and make sure your links work

 

[melovine]

it works for me

not working for you guys?

 

[chdrummer]

nope

 

[melovine]

ok i just up loaded the short clip to my soundclick, if you guys could help point me in a direction i'd really appreciate it,

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=980812&songID=9284778

 

[melovine]

anyone?

 

[oroinvictus]

That SD mix isn't the best sounding, but if it's all you got, it's all you got. The drum mix sounds off, like it wasn't quantized, could just be me. The guitars sound a tiny bit under-gained to me, but I'm not using my headphones at the moment. I'll take a listen when I get home.

 

[melovine]

i forgot to mention this is with out the SD 2.0,

 

[ahjteam]

Any one notice any obvious mistakes?

no bass guitar. see the links in my sig

 

[darthjujuu]

only one guitar o_0? track that ish twice and hard pan 'em