New track - Toneport/V-amp/Reason

Ravenous Enemy

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Mar 24, 2003
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I recently did the guitars and programming for this new track i wrote ridiculous new track for my band, and the singers put a few ideas to it (very rough). I know the guitars are very sloppy - but i wanted to get some thoughts as to what i should do to improve it as far as editing/mixing goes?

Guitars are half v-amp 2 (left) and half toneport (right), although i think there are 5 tracks in total so it's really 2/5 and 3/5 respectively. The bass was also done through the toneport. Drums and piano are done in reason. There's some live synth (roland sh-201) too.

I realise this isn't the kind of stuff you're used to hearing on here either!
but still - thoughts?