I think the balance is not good on this one, although the mix of the instruments thenselfs are good.
When I mean balance I mean that its almost a 2D feeling. Everything is just in your face, but without depth. Also I feel a lack of clarity on guitars.
Hi hat is too much upfront IMO, that disturbes me. Too much information.
Production wise I would say that the snare fits the mix, but it doesn't sound good. (maybe blending with other snares? That should sound better, but will eat space on a mix thats already full)