Newish song, need some input

ballstix

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I wrote this a little while ago and just finished recording the bass...the strings were nice and jello-like from downtuning, so some of the playing is kinda bullshitty. Overall I feel like the mix is a bit of a mess, which is partially due to the sloppiness but mostly due the mixing itself.

Link: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1570706/rrrr.mp3

Any recommendations would be greatly appreciated!