Im listening on kind of shitty headphones, and Im not a pro (im not a complete idiot either though), but my 2 cents are as follows, 1) The clean or acoustic track could come down a bit, I get that its the primary thing but its a bit overpowering. 2) The drums could come up a bit in general 3) the bass sounds kind of flubby, It might sound cool in another mix, but imo this calls for something kind of dry and bass heavy sound, maybe a fretless? or eq it so its more eathy sounding 4) those distorted guitars add a ton of ambeince to the track, I like them, give me more. 5) the track is really cool, thanks for sharing.
