Noob mix needs to improve ;)

[grimbolt]

hey guys!

this is one of my first mixes since i'm here..
although my mixes improved a lot, there's still something missing..

hope you guys could help me to get my mixes to a new level

thanks grim

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3217498/a dead poets scream - zeit.mp3

fixed kick

 

[John_C]

would actually be ok if you did something about the horrible attack on the kick. You need to move that high peak higher and broaden it, it's almost audibly a single pitch at the moment. More comp on the kick as well. 30 - 60 ms attack and set the release to about 120ms

There's a kinda cool grind going on with the guitars that reminds me of AJFA, only the grind though, not the overall tone.

 

[grimbolt]

you're absolutely right - the attack is horrible! thank you for your tips..

well i tried to fix it.. would be cool if someone could give some feedback!

i'll post the link above

 

[plague_rider]

the kicks certainly getting there... i think you still need to widen the Q on the top end a bit...


The Vocals seem a little quit in parts also...