Opinion on my first major ad

[MetalAges]

I just finished my first major ad and would like to know what you guys think of it!

http://www.metalages.com/media/ad-ppusa_bwbk1a.jpg

It will appear in the next issue of BW&BK magazine.



Still awaiting my Intuos 2 tablet to arrive......

 

[changso]

a very effective ad!!!
greyscale makes it better!
excellent work!

 

[redblueyes]

Actually, I think it's excellent.
Good job!

 

[[KOTNO]Narrot]

convincing!