opinions on new song

[KeithReyn]

hey everyone!!!
i started recording a new song lastnight. this is what i have so far pretty much. i have a lead idea for it, and im in the process of recording it now. most of the people on this site are amazing at recording, ive learned alot from this site. id like your opinions on the mix i have going so far.
the song is called 'Forgiven'. anyway, thanks for your time!!!


www.soundclick.com/keithreyn

 

[KeithReyn]

hey guys, i know it isnt supertech death metal, but its a mix none the less. views, but no comments. i know it cant suck that bad.

 

[KeithReyn]

ok, i get it.
Thanks alot producers.

 

[paladin shredder]

good mix. personally i'd put a nice big plate reverb on the snare and maybe a little on the kick since it's a slower song.

 

[ScootBaloo]

Hi Keith,
What you have produced so far sounds nice and is produced well
but so far it is just an introduction to a song.
Please continue with the song and add verse and chorus sections
and then you can expect more comments from this forum.
Don't be shy !!!!!

 

[KeithReyn]

awesome guys, thanks for the comments. i am working at finishing the song and mix and everything.
sorry about my above posts, i was just irritated at being ignored.
i respect you guys so much here, as i said, most everyone here makes great mixes and songs. its your opinions that matter to me, not some friend kissing my ass, haha. ya know?

 

[JonWormwood]

Beef up the snare.

 

[KeithReyn]

suggestions? on what you think i should do to it. like what plugin on the snare? ill mess with it, and see what you think. i learn by doing.

 

[KeithReyn]

ok guys, i changed the bass drum and snare a bit. tell me what you think. thanks!