PANDEMONIUM - My song (demo) (Melodic metal/crazy solos)

[Plendakor]

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[J_H_C]

At the first listening everything before the solo was a little mess and I didn't catch all the riffs (might be a result of bad producing) and the song structure wasn't enough clear for my taste. The solo was good although it wasnt as crazy I expected. I didn't found the COB influence but Symphony X and Dream Theater.
Overall the song was better than a average "melodic metal" song, but Its all because of that nice solo and that one riff after it. 6/10

and sorry, Im not the best one to review this because Im not a big fan of "melodic metal" (like melodeath or symphonic stuff). COB is one of the rare exceptions.
Keep doing it man!

 

[BazsiBazsi]

Great job, I'm looking forward for the final work!

 

[J_H_C]

I could also share my stuff but atm its just crazy shredding drunk with my buddies :-D check it out! https://soundcloud.com/jc-halttunen

 

[J_H_C]

yeah I do the vocals and some drumming although Im not a singer nor drummer but its for fun so whatever and nice vocals going out there dude!

 

[Jontzgu]

I think you should rearrange some parts in the song and leave some out. Here's my idea:
0:00-1:09 > 1:41-2:28 > 1:10-1:28 (breakdown)> 3:06- and the rest as it is now.

I would leave the tremolo riffs (like at 1:30) completely out as I feel they're out of context compared to the other parts of the song. IMO it would make the song much more coherent.

I know I'm thinking for you, but please don't take it the wrong way, I don't mean to offend you. If you think what I'm suggesting is just bull then it probably is.
On a side note, I do like the song quite a bit, it has interesting rhythm parts and the solo is very nice.

 

[MaximHateCrew]

Off-topic

 

[Ensi]

Off-topic

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