Please help me improve this mix!

[Iamsparrow]

OK... Like I've mentioned in my other posts, drums suck... AD is almost in the mail though.

What else should I improve. I can't seem to get the levels quite right and it sounds muddy in some parts

http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/907410/Mural of shame impulse test.mp3

 

[Iamsparrow]

OK Update! major changes plus some more eq and much better drums!

http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/907410/Mural of shame impulse test 2.mp3

 

[Icony]

The song is good and atmospheric. It got some Katatonia/Opeth vibes to it. Guitars seem to need something. More grit? They seem littlebit low in volume too. The rythmguitars specially. And it's true that the drums are quite crappy. But I'm sure the Addictive Drums will save you.
I'm hearing some Shape of Despire in the middle?...that's never a bad thing. Cool stuff overall.

 

[Iamsparrow]

Thanks. Ya the guitars are missing something, Actually they sound horrible on my studio monitors but not terrible on anything else...