Please rate my metalcoremix. Vocals comming next week

[CharlesMonroe1989]

Just reamped one track for a instrumental mix. I was looking for a more dynamic, organic sound, but it all turned out to a ordinary metalcore mix.

What do you think? Any tips especially for the guitar sound?

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/17151953/%21Downforce%20recordings/The%20fall%20of%20sirens/End%20of%20days%20demo%20export%20reamp%206.mp3

 

[CharlesMonroe1989]

So here are the Vocals:

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/17151953/%21Downforce%20recordings/The%20fall%20of%20sirens/The%20Fall%20of%20Sirens%20-%20No%20more.mp3

and yeah. i want to hit the writer of the lyrics in the face. with a chair.

 

[CharlesMonroe1989]

is it so bad? here another song of them: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/17151953/%21Downforce%20recordings/The%20fall%20of%20sirens/The%20Fall%20of%20Sirens%20-%20end%20of%20days.mp3

 

[CharlesMonroe1989]

ok. over 100 clicks and not a single reply. last call: the client is pleased so you can now tell me that i suck balls and every ape on this planet would have moved the faders smarter than me. i want to improve my mixing skills so please

 

[Reginald Hopelessness]

Singing vocals sound a little distant. Try making them louder and maybe have a little less reverb on them (unless that's the sound they're going for). The "No More" and "Never Again" vocal parts on the breakdown could use a little more delay with a little more feedback on the delay. Don't really care for the snare. Kick sounds a little flubby. The guitar solo fade out could be a little longer to make the fade out sound a little more natural.