Please try to help me with this mix

[ali3]

hey

mix: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3109806/okidoki3.mp3

i want to achieve a better sound ^^

but i think this is the best sound i ever got ( i am a noob =) )

again, i maybe could have a better timing on the guitar and it could be cleaner.. =/

but, are there other things i could improve ? ^^


just tell me what you "hear out" ( dunno how to say that )

thanks

ps: i did a new thread cause the older one was posted in another context

 

[AerialThesis]

tune your guitars a bit more

 

[ali3]

thanks, but they were tuned .. hm

any other opinions?

 

[CannibalBarnes]

i find your sound good ! perhaps a reduction in the high medium for the guitars?!

 

[ali3]

thanks i'll try =)

anyone else ?

 

[rfahey86]

Im listening at low volume but it sounds like the guitars are panned really hard. Try bringing them in a little bit or quad tracking them.

 

[ali3]

ok ill try and upload it

 

[ali3]

maaaaaaaan .. i think it sounds much better now =D

thanks x 10000 =D

thanks thanks thanks ^^ =]

do u think so , too ? : http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3109806/okidoki4.mp3

 

[ali3]

nothing to change ?

 

[ali3]

bump

 

[ali3]

just one response would be cool ^^

 

[Masticore]

Production wise it sounds much better than the first post, not as harsh as this one. You get a nice loudness in your mixes also. Keep up the good work, keep practicing, you have nice results so far. A little bass heavy, some of the palm muted stuff starts to loss its definition. A harmony part or two were out of key of each other, if the guitars were in tune you may want to check your intonation.

 

[ali3]

thank you !!

i'll work on it =)

 

[ali3]

when i reduce the bass i doesn't sound good anymore ^^ so it has to be a little bass heavy =)