Pls help me improve the sound

Voltago

New Metal Member
Mar 22, 2007
27
0
1
Hi folks,

here's a song I started when my boss really pissed me off... anyway, I'd like to ask you for your feedback on the sound and the mix, not on the song as is it is still in progress. What do you think, what do I have to improve soundwise? Thanks for your help!

It can be found here: http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7482098