Pop/Rock Song (A la Paramore I guess)

[pifos_2]

Hey guys,

here is a song I produced, check out "Make You Mine", first song in the player on my page :

http://www.brainworksstudios.com

I am curious to know what do you think about the production, the mix or the songwriting.

Ah also, I know about the autotuning, thanks.

 

[Nauru]

The autotune, it burns!

 

[decoys]

awesome song man, melodies are beautiful!

 

[xFkx]

The autotune, it burns!

Yeah, Kill it with fire !

I mean, backing off the the autotune would be wise choice, the harmonies are so tuned that it sounds like a pitchshifting engine.

Otherwise, amazing work !

 

[AudioPhile777]

...cymbals do not sound real. snare is too "metal". kick is kinda buried, in a bad way. vocals are sitting in front just a tad and dont sound like they are part of the song... there are also lots of frequencies fighting for space, its very fatiguing.

Thats my take on it.

I like her voice, though.

 

[Connord00d]

+1 on the snare is too metal, kick needs more low end to cut through, and auto tune is making the vocals blow my speakers up