Post Hardcore/Screamo mix..help?

[sk8ersick666]

So I'd like to get some feedback on this mix. See what I can improve etc.

Let me know guys. Is not recorded to a click btw so can't do much about the tightness of the playing.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2429540/Confront_The_King.wav

 

[wiiii]

Either the vocals are too loud or everything else is too low is my first impression...

 

[sk8ersick666]

i see, i guess the smarter way to go about it is to just turn down the vocals instead of messing with everything else. does that include the singing part?

 

[sk8ersick666]

30 views...only one reply? =[

 

[Nauru]

The kick needs more click, you've got like a weird thuddy beater sound, try boosting like 4 -5 khz. Also the bass could come up.

The songs not bad though.

 

[sk8ersick666]

i see what your saying..thanks

 

[AboutBlank]

Imo:
Vocs are def too loud.
It sounds a little bit "muddy" and cluttered in the midrange, maybe the gits?!

Really don't dig the clean vocals, totally Bless the Fallish, but thats a matter of taste, so nevermind.

 

[sk8ersick666]

here it is with some of the changes (hopefully) you guys suggested..any more ideas?

Thanks again

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2429540/confront-the_king_2.wav

 

[sk8ersick666]

no?