Post-Hardcore Song (Through Arteries - LOL Nice)

[ndwfrm]

So this is my latest production attempt atm.
What do you guys think about the mix?

https://www.dropbox.com/s/vlu8zwfeefjc8hd/through_areteries_lol_nice_remix.mp3

Special thanks to TA vox guy Cory for uploading the DI tracks.