Preproduction mix test song

[Lipown]

http://soundcloud.com/lipo-1/cinzana-bianca-preproduction

I need to some tips to wide guitars... and some criticism on the mix

 

[Lipown]

This is our band preproduction mixtest... and iam helpless with guitars help please )

 

[oroinvictus]

The guitars sound plenty wide to me, although I'm not listening on my monitors. I'd work on some of the edits to make them a little cleaner, like the panning part around 0:18, and the stutter effect at 0:21. They sound like they need some boxy-ness cut out of them, try cutting the 400-700hz area.

 

[Lipown]

Okay, i try tomorrow . With that cleaning proces you mean to play with the tracks or lower distortion (add noisegate?) or something else?

 

[oroinvictus]

It sounds like some of the edits could be tighter, more 'on-grid', so to speak.

 

[Lipown]

Really thanx