Pretty new to this, how can I fix this?

[allthatendswell]

I just started mixing a few months ago and Im looking to improve my mixing skills any advice or techniques would be appreciated.

http://www.mediafire.com/?ogrt0lgtzwq

 

[Seth Munson]

use dropbox homie

EDIT: I like the song name! it reminds me of being back at Disney World!

 

[allthatendswell]

Okay, I put it on dropbox lol now can I get some help?
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6232217/Seeing is Believing.mp3