Rate My Mix (In Flames-ish band with slap bass)

[AStacy2]

Hey guys, I'm having some trouble mixing this track mostly with the slap bass I think, but maybe the problem is else where. Let me know of any ways you think I can improve this mix. Thanks.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=920953


http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/875894/Erasing Never - Man Made.mp3

 

[AStacy2]

Anyone?

 

[CrazyClown]

where is dinamics?
Guitars needs some air. Is it impulses?
Bass need some eq to suits better in mix.

 

[AStacy2]

where is dinamics?
Guitars needs some air. Is it impulses?
Bass need some eq to suits better in mix.

Hey, thanks for the feedback man. Yeah, I may of made the track too loud, I'll work on that. Cool, I'll try to add some air on the guitars too. I'm having trouble eq-ing the bass though. I've honestly never mixed slap bass before and I'm having a hard time getting it to cut through and still be full enough. Any more specific feedback on that issue?

 

[fade_2_black]

The guitars sound quite boxy and muffled - perhaps try get them sounding a little tighter (possibly a matter of reamping if you have that option available) - and to me the vox sound quite quiet..
No advice on how to EQ the bass in sorry - never worked with slap bass! I can imagine it would need a shitload of compression though..