rate my mix please

[kontroldkhaos]

ok i just got me some hs80's and i took the yasser arifats song i found on this forum and mixed it and mastered it. i feel im very close to being perfect..for me any way..i would like some opinions and/or tips if you could. been learning how to mix now for prolly about 4 to 5 months now.so i am a noob but i came to the right place to learn right??

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/36714049/yassar arifat hs80master4.wav

 

[oroinvictus]

The guitars are lacking in low-end, have too much mid-high end and I can't hear a bass track. This makes the guitars sound small and nasally, and all that mid-gain is burying everything else. Vocals could stand to come down a dB or so.

 

[kontroldkhaos]

thank you for your input,after listening to it again with fresh ears i agree your right. so i went in and made some tweaks ,how does this version sound.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/36714049/yassar arifat hs80master4.wav