Rate my Mix !!!

[JoshuaBoshua]

I need help. I've been debating lately weather or not to start recording Bands in my area. I feel like my mix's are super close to a polished sound there's just a bit more I need. These two samples I have up are just some BS clips I made like in 5 mins just to give you an idea of what my mix's sound like. Any advise on what to change and or If I should start recording Bands ?



http://soundcloud.com/joshrc/sets/clips


http://snd.sc/qbx4uzl

 

[jimwilbourne]

you have some stuff to fix but working on other people's music helps out a lot with that.
so yes, if you can, start recording bands.

 

[JoshuaBoshua]

Any tips on what I need to fix ? Kinda left me in the dark there Lol

 

[jimwilbourne]

well, from what you posted, it seems that you lack a bit of life.
but I'm not sure how much time you spent on it. so it could be a complete misrepresentation.

 

[JoshuaBoshua]

Yeah I just whipped em both up quick for examples

 

[Seth Munson]

Tuning

 

[jonathanwroach]

Tuning

Agreed.