well Will, you know im very honest about anything i listen to,
and i believe that people who ask for feedback should learn to accept it...
therefore i give it 4.
im not saying its BAD, not at all, i know you have the talent and the abillity to make it GREAT, but it sounds "un finished"
like a painting that is missing the last touch...
and if you really wanna know what i think: then i think your talent does not reflect at all in that short thing.
it can be GREAT but you make it sound ok.
"ok" however, wont sell.
so ..... im sorry to be a little harsh- but you need a kick in your talented behind Will!
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