Revalver + Wagner riffage

Sounds undergained and fizzy to me, more gain and a little more eq tweaking and it might sound good, also work on your timing, it's off time with the drums in a lot of places.
 
+1

Is this just one take?
two takes.

I added drums later and just used some basic EZdrummer midi files. Panning is Main guitar almost and center and second guitar panned left and right.

I know it sound's yucky, but hey, I'm a noob and I'm still learning ;). So more comments are welcome
 
So is the second guitar two takes or you just copied and panned left/right ?
Anyway you should only leave stuff like leads in the center, rhythm guitars should be at least 2 tracks, preferably four tracks hard-panned (2l+2r).