Rip this mix to shreds! Go on!

I'm desperately trying to (re)mix some of my tracks and learn in the process.

Is there anything good in this mix? Drums, guitars etc. Be brutal. And give me some pointers here!

I'm really struggling with sitting the drums, especially the toms (Qic Toms)... Although there aren't so many fills in this track. Are they to up-front?

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5072151/fl-mix-demo.mp3

Drums are Slate, guitars are Lecto and Lextac, Bass is BOD and Lextac.

Thanks!
 
The ride needs work, it sounds like the same sample and velocity also it's fairly dead sounding. The snare when it kicks in for the first time could probably do with it a bit more verb but then when it goes into the proper song seems to fit pretty well.
 
The ride needs work, it sounds like the same sample and velocity also it's fairly dead sounding. The snare when it kicks in for the first time could probably do with it a bit more verb but then when it goes into the proper song seems to fit pretty well.

Thanks for the input!

Yes I noticed that too when I switched to slate's cymbals, they seem to have less samples/variations that toontrack's.