risecore, chango/sturgis core, 16 year old song writer

[birdwazo]

the band actually said, we want to sound like a rise band, and they said they wanted to have a chango like mix, so I bought some chango drum samples. I used my cymbal samples on this, a china and a splash is from one of joey sturgis cymbal packages. I think the song writing is pretty solid considering the main writer is 16, I definitely didn't write this good when I was 16.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/27347130/ramzi cheese cake final.mp3

 

[updog]

i like a little glitch here and there but it's definitely been overused in this song. the melodic parts could use a bit more wall, maybe add a pad or turn it up if you already have something in there. lacks a bit punch. pretty good overall

 

[oroinvictus]

i like a little glitch here and there but it's definitely been overused in this song. the melodic parts could use a bit more wall, maybe add a pad or turn it up if you already have something in there. lacks a bit punch.

+1, some automation could go a long way

 

[birdwazo]

i like a little glitch here and there but it's definitely been overused in this song. the melodic parts could use a bit more wall, maybe add a pad or turn it up if you already have something in there. lacks a bit punch. pretty good overall

i put virutal tape machine on it, i think it gives it a bit more punch

http://www.ultimatemetal.com/forum/...mparison-risecore-like-band.html#post10329659

 

[foundations]

vocals sound good.. too many glitches for my liking i can barely hear any music for glitches

 

[ShipwreckSoundWorks]

Damn. I'm 16 .. Looks like I'm never writing again. I just focus on doing what I can for other peoples work. Mix sounds good though! Did well with the changocore/sturgiscore production. How did you process those toms? Are those the chango toms?