Senses <---New Song I Just Finished...

TheMisfit

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Hello everyone, how goes it ? Here is a new song a friend & i wrote by the name of "Senses" my friend wrote the lyrics & sang, i played pretty much everything else, bass, guitar, & drums. It's very sludgy in the vein of Sabbath, Down, & EyeHateGod. Let me know what you think of this, all comments appreciated, thanks!

TheMisfit

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Here are the lyrics to "Senses"

Can you feel it?
its my anger headed your way!
Can you see it?
Its my hatered, you're gonna pay! (x2)

Chorus
Its meant for you and you alone
its gonna put you, where you belong
I've said it before and I'll say it again
your ass is mine till eternity's end!

Can you hear it?
Its death knocking at your door
Can you smell it?
Its fear you're admitting from every pore (x2)

Repeat Chorus (x2)

Bridge
Our father which art in heaven, Hallowed be thy name
These are your senses you better trust, to save your ass from me!