I just recorded a rap

Jun 26, 2009
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i thought it might be fun which in fact it really was lol. Mind you im super white but if you want check it outttttttt. Its the instrumental to "Scacrifice" by jedi mind tricks. I just threw in a few samples and rapped.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2113488/MASTER.mp3

Lyrics

Talkin bout a fuckin war between good and evil
seperation of church and state dont believe in faith
Fuck god you can tell him this
and all his followers listen to this
heaven nothin but a dark abyss
hole 6 feet in the dirt
what kind of end is this
its one you cant resist
you fuckin with the best
you can take my vest
closer to death than gary coleman with a bag of meth

you believe in the tooth fairy
you still believe that hoffa's buried
well did you know that im necro scary
I fucked a dead horse, cannibal corpse
as i popped the cherry of the virgin mary

nothing you can do will ever stop me
im more consistent than kobe, by now you already know me
and nothing you can do will ever end this
all the pain you have caused, and all the things you have lost

and as your rot in your cell
for all the sins you have dealt
there aint no heaven or hell
I am kenan to your kel

superior skill, aim once and i kill
dont let me see you i will
Im watching king of the hill

banging on your dome like its a truance
Fuck smoking weed im above the influence
Makin my day im gonna chill out
I heard that your gay so get the fuck out

now im not saying i am the best
but one things for sure, your were made from incest
im gonna bag you up, im gonna whip you like leather
im gonna knock you out, like floyd "money" mayweather

what is said today will be remembered tomorrow
someone oneday, will turn around and betray
history, tends to repeat itself
matramony of marriage, just another miscarriage

Now im gone in just a blink of an eye
another will replace me after i die
its like an endless cycle, its just the circle of life
so please excuse me, i must go and comply
 
wow this is fucking terrible. The dude sounds like he doesn;t even want to be there, no conviction at all and so monotone , was this a joke or was he serious?
 
wow this is fucking terrible. The dude sounds like he doesn;t even want to be there, no conviction at all and so monotone , was this a joke or was he serious?

Hahahaha it was me lol. I did it as a complete joke and did the whole thing in less than an hour. Thank you for the criticism though ;)
 
Hahahaha it was me lol. I did it as a complete joke and did the whole thing in less than an hour. Thank you for the criticism though ;)

ah ok , well if it was meant as a joke then its pretty funny
i pictured some white dude walking in all serious , like "record my ill shit cracka"
 
I'm checking this out because I've actually started working on a rap recently, too :lol: I'm not at all serious about it and I'm finding it a bit difficult to maintain the lyrical rhythmic flow.
I totally don't feel so out of place now!!!
 
I thought it was okay at the start. Got a bit loose towards the end.

Prop's for posting it though. I've done some hip-hop... but no way I'm posting here for all you fuckers to tear me a new one. :lol: