Short clip- Hardcore post-metal? idk

[The StabbinCabin]

I'm writing some stuff I'd like to say will be in a similar strain to recent UnderOath with influences from like Isis and stuff and have like traditional hardcore drum parts. Basically just trying to write something that can sound big and still be fast and aggressive and would be fun to interact with at shows.

I wanted to post a clip up as to where I was with my quick demo stuff to get general opinion on the mix and what I could do better/differently to get more separation/fidelity/spread and all that.

Thanks guys

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/11848604/Anchorite_Anchoress clip1.mp3