Short clip, need advice

[JoergieN]

Alright this is the second clip I've uploaded here and a hell of a lot better than the first one. Although it sounds good as hell to me I'm sure it won't to most of you so I need you guys to tear it apart and let me know what I need to do to make it better.

https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Test.wav?w=9ab9766f

Guitars are POD Farm and Lecto
Bass is also POD Farm
Drums are various samples I collected from this forum

And also, I did not record or mix this with monitors but I did use very good computer speakers. Thanks guys.

 

[AllanD]

Error, you posted the wrong link. Post the public link.

 

[MaellaJohn]

Error, you posted the wrong link. Post the public link.

+1

 

[JoergieN]

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/10559997/Test.wav

Try it now

 

[MaellaJohn]

I like the guitars a lot. Maybe turn them down a little though, because they seem to be overpowering the drums.

 

[JoergieN]

Thanks man, that's your kick by the way. I can definitely see the guitars being too loud. I will update the mix and upload it in the morning

 

[JoergieN]

Okay I remixed it this time. But this time I did it a lot differently. I turned the gain up a lot, turned the drums up, and turned the kick way up. To me in my ear phones it sounds good but I have a feeling that with people with monitors it'll sound like shit but you guys will have to tell me that. Anyways, here it is, if you can't access it let me know, and as always, tear it up and let me know what needs to be done.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/10559997/hgaintest.wav