Short Story

[Dylan of Gilead]

For my Creative Writing class, we were assigned to have a short story prepared by Thursday. I decided to get a leg up, and actually finished the whole thing between last night and tonight. I have a week to get it in, though, and I was wondering if anybody here would want to take a look at it and let me know what they thought/give me any tips or criticism.

I'm not gonna post the whole thing here, since it's seven pages long, but if anybody wants to check it out, let me know. My AIM screename is daedric dylan.

 

[GmT-Curwen]

I don't have AIM, but if you send it to me via pm I'll read it tomorrow and give you my opinnion.

 

[Dylan of Gilead]

I tried to send it via PM, but it's too long.

 

[GmT-Curwen]

Don't copypaste it, attach the .doc file or upload it to http:/www.badongo.com/

 

[Dylan of Gilead]

http://www.badongo.com/file/7688063

There ya go.

For anybody, I guess.

 

[GmT-Curwen]

Thanks.