Sketch of my cover art

FrostGiant

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Just a sketch of what I'm planning on. Not sure what I'm going to do with it. Either just a pencil sketch like this and ink the rose in red or do an oil painting, but anyway. Any comments will be appreciated. Also, if the image isn't there, disregard. I've been having problems with this whole image hosting thing. I'm pretty new at it.

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the idea os it is quite good although i do feel that you need to work on the face,....its all verysutle..which is good, although u need to work on the drawing of the woman, her features, u need tow ork alot around the eyes and the lips, either change her features to look more pleasnt and soft, or just soften all of her....just some thoughts on it!
 
Agreed. I just wanted to get the idea down on paper to see if I liked it. The eyes are actually different sizes too. Also I need to put more work into the flower. Make it more intricate. tnx.