Nice music.
As far as the mix goes I would suggest the following changes:
overheads and high hat are a bit loud so take these down a bit
snare needs some more volume
Kick seems a bit too compressed and clicky for my taste
vocals these sound very muffled and distant. I'm not great with vocals but I think giving them some more high mids and reducing some of the low mids/lows would make it a lot better. The double tracking might also obscure them a bit but it's hard to tell at the moment
Distorted guitars sound a bit harsh at times. I think a small high mid cut might help here and also make the vocals more audiable.