Solitude

[Ragnarok]

This is an idea I have for my band tell me if you like it.
I did it today, I think it reflects something tell me what you think hehe!!!!!!!!!

Solitude

I return to my solitude
I return to the cries of my chants
I return to the land of eternal shadows
Once again I find my reality.

I sign in my solitude
Like and elf in obscurity
I fly far like a bird of light
That has lost it self in infinity.

Alone in the dark
I sit down
with out nothig with out power
I wait for suffering to take me away.

My mind fights with it self
two souls betrayed my soul,
The harmless one takes my trust
the other one takes my love

Now I come back to my solitude
But rage doesn't come to me.
Solitude is my reality and that is my chant.

 

[Hopkins-WitchfinderGeneral]

Solitude - Excellent black sabbath song.

Cathedral cover rules too

 

[Ragnarok]

well this song is how I feel at the moment.....had a shitty week, so I guess this is my little scape.....

 

[Powerslave]

Originally posted by Ragnarok

I sign in my solitude
Like and elf in obscurity
I fly far like a bird of light
That has lost it self in infinity.

Get rid of this part and it's great. It just gets a bit too cheesy. If you're gonna get cheesy then do the entire thing cheesy.

 

[Ragnarok]

erm....thanks, but think I am going to leave it that way.
Maybe you are right it is too cheesy.....I will think of something.

 

[Hobo]

Solitude... most exelent gothenburg death band from Boden, Sweden..

 

[Ragnarok]

Well it seems that you like my song, that is nice....I was thinking of usig it in my band......but is too personal...I guess only one time I will play it...