something i made

[Pessimism]

i like fucking around with other bands lyrics and stuff - so i did vehemence with this, and well just tell me if you like it. i just titled it vehemence because well, you guys wrote the lyrics (well, nathan mostly anyway).

Vehemence

see the sunrise casting luminous shadows
i hasten my effort
butchering this child and saving the segments
Surveying the wreckage i pretend to care
-Digging furiously i frantically search
Blood pools underneath us from severed arteries
I feel no shame for this disgrace, this atrocity

with a lifeless childs corpse
its head drops gently upon simple rolled cloth
How much time she's lost
where is the warmth of the light?

As I penetrate thee earth
My skin is soiled and raw. . . digging
Fingernails snap off from misuse
My shaking bloodied hand scrapes the finished wood
Gazing into her eyes
Reflecting in shades of color I can't imagine
Weeping at the beauty of her lost innocence
Touching her tear-stained cheek, gazing deeply into her eyes

Grabbing her severed head
My love for her was the strongest she'd felt
We embrace
. . . As distant voices start closing in
Exhausted and broken . . .
Her body is replaced into the ground
I am the one whom she'll always remember . . .
Earths filled in hastily as I flee from the graveyard
My love for her was the strongest
My love
Gazing into her eyes
this all right
A tear drips from my eye lamenting the loss
Gazing into her eyes
this all right . . .



i was actually thinking about recording what it would sound like, but . . . no recording stuff at all. it would kickass if you actually used these lytrics as a bonus song or something in my opinion. anyway, anyone have any thouhts?

 

[VEHEMENCE]

Hey man thats pretty cool, you mixed up the lyrics from all of our other songs into one big one. However, doesnt follow the God Was Created story line, and jumbles up alot of lyrics to make it sound like nonsense. Thanks for taking the time though, I had a pleasure reading through it.

 

[FuckYouIWantToDie]

interesting, kind of tells a whole new story

 

[Pessimism]

yeah, i wasnt trying to follow the storyline on god was created, but i did take some of the primary lyrics from there - i just wanted to make a small little story seperate from the cds.

 

[VEHEMENCE]

Only if there was some imagery to go along with it. = )

 

[Pessimism]

why, are you challenging me ????