Song Idea Clip *need feedback*

[atmetal]

Hello all. So this time, I think i have finally gotten a decent sound. It is a really short clip, but I am working on finishing the song. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!! If you would like to know any of the settings, just ask.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7176396

*EDIT*

Here is my second mix.

Took some of the harshness out of the guitars and changed the snare. I turned up the overheads a little, because in the program they seemed a little low, but after i played it back on soundclick they sound a bit loud. oh well. snare and guitar better?

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7178443

 

[Zuranthus]

way too much reverb on the snare (unless that's what you were going for) i'd cut some of the highs off the guitar (maybe the entire track)
can't comment on much else since i'm on headphones

 

[atmetal]

i did the clip in about 15 minutes so highs for sure need to be cut the more i listen to it. but i get that problem anytime i use pod anyways. and the reverb on the snare was done like that on purpose. just kind of messing around. ill cut some and see what i come up with

 

[Black neon bob]

Guitars, yes!
bass, yes!
Drums.. yes! minus the snare, needs seeing to as it sounds way too wet and weird, kick toms and cupper sounds great.

so... yes!

 

[GarethSE]

love the filtered drum fill in the intro.
Stylish as fuck haha.

Guitars are a tad harsh, nothing more to add that hasn't already been said, blah blah.

 

[atmetal]

sweeet. thanks for the feedback. ill work on it and see what i can get a re upload it for some more feed back

 

[atmetal]

bump for new mix