Snare and vocals sound cool. I think the kick and the spooky background vocals should be quite a bit higher in the mix and the guitars could use some additional low end (they sound a bit too thin at the moment). If it clashes with the bass, maybe turn that down a bit. In addition I think you could turn the main vocal down a bit and the guitars up a bit. In the blast part at the end the hats sound a little too thin to me, would sound better if these had fuller and more aggressive sound. The bass in that part is also a bit too nice in my opinion would sound better if it would play more and sound meaner (adding some extra top end distortion and maybe playing some faster and/or melodic stuff would seem a good idea here). Music is very nice btw, like it a lot.