Suggestions (heavy metal mix)

[parisowar]

this is the first song i do for a band. Please give me some feedback

http://soundcloud.com/parisowar/redeemer-19june-finalized

 

[parisowar]

well?

 

[parisowar]

I am not a profesional and this is the first time i work with a band.
I reaaaaaaaally need your feedback

 

[parisowar]

Anyone?

 

[viralz]

King Diamond influence

Drums and vocals sound alright, but damn those guitars need more definition, sounds like a big pile of noise.

 

[parisowar]

King Diamond influence

Drums and vocals sound alright, but damn those guitars need more definition, sounds like a big pile of noise.

Thanks, I will try to give more definition to the guitars

 

[parisowar]

King Diamond influence

Drums and vocals sound alright, but damn those guitars need more definition, sounds like a big pile of noise.

http://soundcloud.com/parisowar/redeemer-27june-for-ss

i did some changes. Is it any better now?